tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2762330519599483179.post5192029379223080864..comments2023-10-26T07:08:32.738-04:00Comments on <br><br><br>See Heather Write: No Kiss Blog Fest!Heatherhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/18096173111325220168noreply@blogger.comBlogger20125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2762330519599483179.post-62287393994558096292010-01-03T16:10:31.492-05:002010-01-03T16:10:31.492-05:00This is hilarious! I love it! It's so much dif...This is hilarious! I love it! It's so much different than all those other "almost kisses" where someone interrupts them, you know? Great job. :)à la vanillehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14540464213833305365noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2762330519599483179.post-50608930617224093972010-01-03T12:47:14.041-05:002010-01-03T12:47:14.041-05:00I'm so glad everyone enjoyed it!! I don't ...I'm so glad everyone enjoyed it!! I don't have much experience writing comedy so I'm glad to know people thought it was funny! Thanks to everyone who read/commented!<br /><br />To anyone wondering whether they get a second chance...Marshall is a generally nice guy, and even though Jenn ignores his phone calls for awhile, he finally gets through with a clever message of some kind and they go on a very successful second date. <br /><br />And, the Blogger Girlz: I can write about a rumbling tummy, but I'm not prepared to write about someone having diarrhea all over their date, so she pretty much had to make it inside, for my sake!Heatherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18096173111325220168noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2762330519599483179.post-59647158104130208922010-01-03T02:30:57.356-05:002010-01-03T02:30:57.356-05:00ROFL! Hahaha! I started cracking up at the first s...ROFL! Hahaha! I started cracking up at the first scene, started laughing harder while they were listening to Sinatra. Started tearing up when they got to the speed bumps, and completely lost it at the sound of the "tree frogs!" This is going to be a hard act to follow :D Many thanks for sharing!iwriteallaboutithttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08990349745043088491noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2762330519599483179.post-39351264752129877382010-01-03T00:04:10.637-05:002010-01-03T00:04:10.637-05:00hahahah I was laughing pretty much from the get go...hahahah I was laughing pretty much from the get go on this one... Awesome scene! I'm practically flushed myself in mortification for Jenn!Sara {Rhapsody and Chaos}https://www.blogger.com/profile/09824996048264979275noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2762330519599483179.post-12004863295968429062010-01-02T23:17:54.898-05:002010-01-02T23:17:54.898-05:00Hahaha. What a way to ruin a kiss! :)Hahaha. What a way to ruin a kiss! :)Vicky Bhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14549357831278863152noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2762330519599483179.post-8547319618303371122010-01-02T20:57:51.490-05:002010-01-02T20:57:51.490-05:00LOL I loved this! Being a sufferer of intetestina...LOL I loved this! Being a sufferer of intetestinal problems myself, I can totally sympthize with Jenn. :-)C R Wardhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13212244053084461118noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2762330519599483179.post-2261960396168562692010-01-02T20:32:22.900-05:002010-01-02T20:32:22.900-05:00LOL! so glad you decided to particiapte and I hope...LOL! so glad you decided to particiapte and I hope it does end up in a WIP.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12206332687245407375noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2762330519599483179.post-66373888903891854302010-01-02T18:47:40.717-05:002010-01-02T18:47:40.717-05:00That is hilarious! I really enjoyed this. :) Glad ...That is hilarious! I really enjoyed this. :) Glad I've never ran into this problem!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05283503033516504436noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2762330519599483179.post-27283720069283830862010-01-02T18:18:40.149-05:002010-01-02T18:18:40.149-05:00Oh, what a nightmare! For both of them. Is there a...Oh, what a nightmare! For both of them. Is there anyway to redeem this evening???Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09687047513163296827noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2762330519599483179.post-5674046823651658412010-01-02T17:08:33.095-05:002010-01-02T17:08:33.095-05:00Haha, awesome scene, I can so relate! I was in su...Haha, awesome scene, I can so relate! I was in suspense the whole time! Thank God she made it inside at the last second or else...Who KNOWS what might've happened! *Shudders* Can't wait to read more! :D<br /><br />~EllaThe Blogger Girlzhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16915385689799889397noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2762330519599483179.post-54443730032669818572010-01-02T15:27:59.596-05:002010-01-02T15:27:59.596-05:00Ouch, I so felt for her those speedbumps I wanted ...Ouch, I so felt for her those speedbumps I wanted to throw my hands up in exhasperation with her. That just sucks. Well done, I loved it!Hayley Lovellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16786674202167099600noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2762330519599483179.post-7698107156072490302010-01-02T14:57:56.394-05:002010-01-02T14:57:56.394-05:00I was smiling the entire time! This scene took a t...I was smiling the entire time! This scene took a turn I was expecting but loved! Great job!V. Shttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00406440235719919992noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2762330519599483179.post-9705953255094176452010-01-02T14:29:32.361-05:002010-01-02T14:29:32.361-05:00Uggggh! I could so see that happening in real life...Uggggh! I could so see that happening in real life. I was laughing out loud and loved the literally shit all over it line. Please tell me she gets a do over date that goes much more smoothly. FANTASTIC scene!<br /><a href="http://karenamandahooper.blogspot.com" rel="nofollow">My Blog</a>kahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10789825860272178765noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2762330519599483179.post-71628390525948160512010-01-02T14:26:48.571-05:002010-01-02T14:26:48.571-05:00Heather, you're hilarious! I've been dying...Heather, you're hilarious! I've been dying to write a romantic scene ruined by intestinal issues, but I haven't had the opportunity yet. Thanks for doing it for me! Poor Jenn!Donna Gambalehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00317767593205769881noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2762330519599483179.post-87669139327454399382010-01-02T14:13:59.382-05:002010-01-02T14:13:59.382-05:00Awesome! Total embarrassment, I love it. Having b...Awesome! Total embarrassment, I love it. Having been in this position before(at least with the stomach gurgling, maybe not the almost kiss), I could totally relate to her. Poor girl!Juliehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07850344847209933016noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2762330519599483179.post-3603763413508133982010-01-02T13:41:45.958-05:002010-01-02T13:41:45.958-05:00Okay, that wins the prize for funniest no kiss (so...Okay, that wins the prize for funniest no kiss (so far at least--though I don't see how anyone could top it. Awesomely done Heather. And I hope you do write this story because these characters are excellent!Shannon Messengerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08003607156860716462noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2762330519599483179.post-75646801586471091262010-01-02T13:41:15.042-05:002010-01-02T13:41:15.042-05:00LOL...I loved this! I can just picture it all! Goo...LOL...I loved this! I can just picture it all! Goodness! *wiping eyes with laughter-tears* Awesome almost kiss!Sherrinda Ketchersidhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07581676437345249386noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2762330519599483179.post-29529906813244502802010-01-02T13:32:26.807-05:002010-01-02T13:32:26.807-05:00Hilarious !
That's a horrible first date, but ...Hilarious !<br />That's a horrible first date, but a great scene for No Kiss. Great Job (:LittoMiss isuethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12732668024487371210noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2762330519599483179.post-67523645670201194642010-01-02T13:28:01.214-05:002010-01-02T13:28:01.214-05:00This was awesome! I was grinning with sympathetic ...This was awesome! I was grinning with sympathetic laughter the entire piece! I'm kind of glad her stomach gave her away at the end--so that he wouldn't think she didn't like him! haha.<br />Thanks for sharing this! Happy No-Kiss Day!Amalia Dillinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13005039978668326144noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2762330519599483179.post-42017309301203746972010-01-02T13:27:28.750-05:002010-01-02T13:27:28.750-05:00Heather you had me in such suspense the whole time...Heather you had me in such suspense the whole time and when those speed bumps came in I nearly died. This was horribly Fantastic!!! Ahahahah loved it! Also I really thought they would kiss, I forgot that it was a no kiss. I cant wait to read more and find out how she moves forward from the embarassment!Frankie Diane Mallishttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06066659801542129040noreply@blogger.com